Writing copy
You have to work twice as hard to grab the attention of a listener when writing a news bulletin, as there are no visual aids.
Good copy will:
- Have a 'headline' style to it
- Have the main point of the story in the first sentence
- Cut out waffle. It's not a lecture or an essay - just include the salient facts
- Avoid repetition e.g. avoid using 'The Government wants... the public wants'
- Avoid polysyllabic words where a mono one would have done the job... like I could have just said 'long words' there. The copy will have to be read out on air, and words that are tricky to say just make the whole process more difficult
- Avoid clichés, melodrama and emotive language - where applicable; it is acceptable to say house prices 'crashed' if they dropped overnight by 30%, but not acceptable to say an MP 'attacked' the Prime Minister when all they did is disagree with them. Unless The Sun has a radio station, leave it out
- Avoid complex sentences with many a comma. It's not an 18th century book on philosophy, and while the reader is struggling to make sense of the long sentence a listener will lose track of what they are trying to say
- Remember your target audience at all times. While younger listeners will prefer a more conversational style, older listeners tend to see this as a lack of authority. It's acceptable to use longer words for an older audience.
- As you write your copy, read it aloud to see if it flows and is easy to say.
Mechanics
1 line spacing
One side of the page only, to avoid the sound of rustling paper on air
Never handwritten, always typed up so that everybody can read it
Audio cuts written as: "Mr Brown has defended his decision"
Audio name - Brown expenses
IN WORDS: I have already...
OUT WORDS: ...will not be drawn.
Duration: 10'
SOC
(which means standard out cue - I'm John Smith, and that was the news. You stay classy, Hampshire)
Peas in a POD - Perfect Oral Delivery
PACE
Nice, consistent pace
Slower than ordinary conversation
Variation in intonation
PAUSE
Well placed pauses
Mark script with pauses
Helps to phrase things properly - spoken punctuation
PHRASING
Grouping of words into 'sense units' A sense unit is a mental concept spoken in one breath.
PITCH
Is the position of sound on the tone scale.
Make it low but give it variation
Mark your script so that you know where the most important words are which should have the most stress
PRONUNCIATION
Received pronunciation used to be the standard - not many stations would deviate away from that
Any accent is acceptable now... BUT:
Avoid glottal stops (sounding like you're from Eastenders) and misconstruing the meaning of words
e.g.
Perfect is an adjective. Perfect is a verb. Be clear.
PRACTICE
Recording yourself speaking is the only way to improve.
Also helps to listen to the professionals doing it - listen to the radio.
That's it folks.
Very good posts and an excellent performance in the romanticism webcast. But the radio embed does not seem to work. Also when you linked to other blogs (UCLAN) you did not leave comments. The point is to leave comments so that you get a link back to your own site and this will generate traffic. Really good notes on radio and all students would benefit from those.
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